WOW, I just got ripped by another author on one of the reviews! Now I love constructive criticism! I eat it up because it helps me know what to work on but just being plain out rude, well there is no need for it! If some of you don't know I am SELF published and SELF edit! I don't have anyone to do that for me and I sure can't afford to have it done like a lot of authors I know. I write for fun and just want everyone to enjoy it. I do not expect to make millions off of these! And for this to come from another author WOW! I would never have been so rude! If its an up and coming author or self publish like myself you tell them the high points and what to work on not tear them down! Sorry to rant but that really gets under my skin!!! I have had a ton on criticism on the first book and I took it all in because I want to get better but there is no need to get ugly!